I shedded a tear into the ocean's bliss
Hoping to command your boat to me
To search for you,
For the passion we had before it faded into the sunset
The connection that dimed through our souls
Now its gone~
I'm the candle in your wind
Your lighting, your thunder
The kind of soul who will hunt for you longer
Waiting without hope
Until you come back,
One day~
Even though my delusions aren't helping me get over you,
I shed another tear into the ocean's bliss.
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The image refers to my soulmate. As hysteric as this sounds, I manifested him... he was my soulmate.
About the Creator
Kodah
- Storyteller, Love/Romance, Dark, Surrealism, Psychological, Nature, Mythical, Whimsical
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Comments (9)
The imagery of shedding tears into the ocean, hoping to summon the beloved's boat, evokes a powerful sense of longing and desperation. The verse's lyrical, evocative quality resonates with the timeless pain of unrequited love. Thank you very much!
There is always gold at the end of rainbows, new gold awaits in a soulmate not yet met. Mourn not my dear, doors close and doors open. Just give it time,
Heart shattering and so powerful. My heart goes out to you Kodah โฅ๏ธ
I really relate to this one. The beauty of "I shedded a tear into the ocean's bliss / Hoping to command your boat to me" is stark and lonely and oddly hopeless but beautiful nonetheless. This poem is really something. I always love your work, but this one cuts deep!
Oh, Kodah, this must be so hard. The poem is heartbreakingly beautiful and I hope it helps you heal.
Iโm so sorry Kodahโค๏ธ I hope youโre ok, Iโm always here for a chat
Wow, Kodahโค๏ธ
Gosh your words hit me so hard because it was extremely relatable! Loved your poem. Sending you lots of love and hugs โค๏ธ
good job