self-love,
adorned upon me like a cloak,
dripping from my pores,
a language only my heart understands.
self-love,
saves what has been repeatedly shattered,
by those that couldn't love themselves.
"Be gentle with me," I say to myself,
as I learn to be kind
to the person in the mirror
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Chloe Rose Violet ๐น
quiet about the wounds
loud about the healing
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As I learn to be kind to the person in the mirror. Nicely Done. Congratulations on honorable mentions.
Thank you everyone! โฅ๏ธ
Well deserved Honourable Mention for this perceptive poem๐๐ผ.
Wooohooooo congratulations on your honourable mention! ๐๐๐๐๐๐
Congratulations, Chloe!!
This is so beautiful and touching, CRV ๐
Beautiful โจ
I love this!! We have to learn to love ourselves first and foremost in life!
I like the idea of self love dripping from our pores. Then the repetition of self love leading to the next line of โrepeatedโ shattering of the self by others. Such a well thought out structure, if it was unintentional, even better. I love that you include that we can be a bully to ourselves too. My favourite line was โbe gentle with meโ ๐๐ฝ๐๐ฝ๐คโฅ๏ธ
Oh, this is lovely. Well done.