Shooting stars
For the Sky-ku Challenge #2
Ageless souls travel
Across the sky, dust and rocks
Shooting star on high
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Caitlin Charlton
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Comments (18)
What a wonderful Haiku Caitlin!🌌 I love shooting stars, and you've perfectly captured how they dart across the sky, enchanting the people who watch them.✨✨
Awesome piece!!!!!
Ohh! That's a beautiful haiku! ✨Caitlin It captures a timeless, cosmic journey in such few words—a glimpse of eternity in the fleeting beauty of a shooting star.👏
Hi Caitin! So well crafted. Gentle and reassuring. Ageless souls as shooting stars. It is very emotional to read - reminds me of my Mum’s somewhat similar sentiments. My Mum now deceased but I believe as she did: that she is now ‘one with the stars.’ Pauline ♥️
Such a sweet and magical description of a shooting star. Love it 💫
So gorgeous! Shooting stars are so magical and thought-provoking. I love the idea of "ageless souls" 🤗✨
you such a talent
I forgot about that old wives tale!! Love that you included it in this haiku, very clever Caitlin!!
Very pretty.
Oooo, ageless souls! I love the idea of them being shooting stars! So beautiful!
I agree with Pamela's comment. They are a wonderful beginning and closing lines for your Haiku, Caitlin! Excellent challenge entry!
Great haiku
This is such a poignant poem. Some do believe this.
I love this- Ageless souls - Shooting Stars on high
A stunning piece :)
Beautiful lines! Wonderful✨ 💫✨👏
Phenomenally written!
Your poem captures the fleeting nature of moments and emotions, much like shooting stars themselves. The imagery you used draws readers in, allowing us to experience the wonder and longing that come with witnessing these rare and ephemeral glimpses of light. There’s a profound sense of connection in the way you depict the night sky, as if it mirrors our own transient experiences. I’m left pondering the significance of those moments that pass by too quickly—much like shooting stars—yet leave an indelible mark on our souls.