Sky Bunting
An Entry for the Sky-ku Challenge
Look! Coloured ball in
Romanticised suspension;
Decorates the blue.
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It is Valentine's Day again, and it bought back memories that were over fifty years old. It bought me back to 1971, and I woke up and I knew my baby was due today. I was big and pregnant, and I felt like I was about to burst wide open. Imagine my surprise when the doctor told my I had a due date of February 14. I couldn't believe it, and since my baby was due today, I felt I could indulge myself a bit. I had gained a lot of weight, and chocolate was on the no-no list, but I had came to the end of this pregnancy, and I hoped it would be okay, after all I would deliver this baby today. So I walked across the street to the grocery story, and bought myself, a peppermint patty, covered in chocolate, my favorite. Me and my Valentine's baby would enjoy it together.
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Comments (15)
'Romanticised suspension' is an awesome phrase!
This is a nice idea
I absolutely love this one!
A beautiful haiku. And the image you used fits perfectly!
This was perfect
Sky bunting!
Clever and lovely Haiku, Rachel. The pic looks it's filled with sky marbles!
Nice entry my friend.☺️
Finallyyyyyy, something that I'm sure I cannot interpret it in any other way, lol. Loved your Haiku!
Delightful! Such beautiful phrases to capture a wonderful image!
Absolutely gorgeous! Hot air balloons are so beautiful.
Oh I love this Rachel!! Such a clear thing to find in the sky and so elegantly written!
Simply lovely, and what a pretty pic.
spot on! great entry :)
Amazing description, Rachel!