*This piece was originally written for a poetry class I took as an undergraduate. It was fun to revisit it and put it through some edits.*
The girls had red-penned through calendar squares, felling January…February…the first half of March. Then the car was filled with suitcase-stuffing, the windows and sunroof left open—gaping mouths exhaling laughter, coughing on hair-left-down. Mist filigreeing around rows-and-rows of pine tree trunks had them squealing over Flo Rida beats, whooping when hotel silhouettes building-blocked up on the horizon. They hefted baggage—should’ve bought a new bikini should’ve invested in a spray tan should’ve lost a pound or two three four—to the room, deposited suitcases on beds covered in palm-fronds fossilized in fabric. And, finally, they shucked their flip-flop manacles, sprinting out barefooted to the storm-wet sand, stopping as the seafoam bubbled against their toes. Before them, a pelican plunged into sifting surf and emerged, pouch expanded and trembling.
About the Creator
Hannah E. Aaron
Hello! I'm mostly a writer of fiction and poetry that tend to involve nature, family, and the idea of growth at the moment. Otherwise, I'm a reader, crafter, and full-time procrastinator!
Feelings Never Die
It is Valentine's Day again, and it bought back memories that were over fifty years old. It bought me back to 1971, and I woke up and I knew my baby was due today. I was big and pregnant, and I felt like I was about to burst wide open. Imagine my surprise when the doctor told my I had a due date of February 14. I couldn't believe it, and since my baby was due today, I felt I could indulge myself a bit. I had gained a lot of weight, and chocolate was on the no-no list, but I had came to the end of this pregnancy, and I hoped it would be okay, after all I would deliver this baby today. So I walked across the street to the grocery story, and bought myself, a peppermint patty, covered in chocolate, my favorite. Me and my Valentine's baby would enjoy it together.
By Susan Paytona day ago in Fiction

Comments (1)
This piece exudes a wonderful sense of freedom and joy. It's as if I can feel the sand and the sun with you—truly mesmerizing!