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Tear Ducks Quack

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By Rowan Finley Published 3 months ago 1 min read
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The dam usually breaks at night.

Rarely, ever does it occur in the daylight.

But if it’s during the day,

then Billie Eilish is singing “What Was I Made For.”

Her lyrics float…

into S P A C E,

similarly, as to how I used to, on myself, dote.

Tear ducks quack.

Vocal chords crack.

The present smacks

me with all the uncomfortable facts.

I strive to whisper an optimistic thanks

to my subordinate, battling, emotional, ranks.

surreal poetryMental Health

About the Creator

Rowan Finley

Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. My real name is Jesse Balogh.

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  • Aarsh Malik2 months ago

    Your language and phrasing create a striking sense of vulnerability and honesty.

  • Archery Owl2 months ago

    🦆🦆🦆 Creative and True

  • Kendall Defoe 3 months ago

    Well, it wasn't wack.

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