The First Argument💦
How it felt like the end of the world do you remember?💦

The First Argument💦
In the tender glow of love’s new bloom,
A shadow crept into the room.
Words once soft now sharp as knives,
Cutting through the bond that thrives.
Eyes that sparkled, now stormy skies,
Love’s sweetness laced with bitter cries.
A misunderstanding, a tangled thread,
Words unspoken, fears unsaid.
Yet as the silence stretched so tight,
The truth emerged, bathed in light.
For in the clash of hearts and minds,
A deeper understanding binds.
The first storm shakes, but roots hold true,
Revealing strength where love once grew.
Hand in hand, though tempests start,
They weather storms with open hearts 💦
About the Creator
Marie381Uk
I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️


Comments (5)
So true
The most accurate love
The first storm shakes, but roots hold true, Revealing strength where love once grew. That was surreal ✨🤝 You've written a beautiful piece ❤
If only we bail together we may both keep from drowning. 😉🥰 Very nicely said Marie.
Oh, this is such a beautiful piece! The clash, the growth, and the resilience—it perfectly captures the essence of love’s first test. A tender storm, but the roots stay strong. So lovely!🌺✨