Floating crimson sphere
Dancing on the windy sky
Freedom's gentle kiss
About the Creator
Sara C
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The Lesions of Devotion
Every day I set myself down on the freshly cut lawn and strip myself bare. I take my guitar and finger the frets and pick at the strings, listening for dissonance. My life is dissonance. I twist the tuning pegs until each string sounds bright. Then I kneel, calves pointing behind me, kneecaps facing forward. All exposed to the breeze. I close my eyes and play the melody.
By Paul Stewart5 days ago in Fiction
Comments (8)
Congrats!
Great job 👍🏼… vividly captured the feeling of escapee balloons 🎈.
Freedom’s gentle kiss. I love that. Congrats!
This is so simple yet so powerful. Well done and congrats on the win!
Beautiful! Congratulations!
Beautiful Haiku!!! Congratulations on the runner up win!!!❤️❤️💕
Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
So glad the balloon found its freedom. Great sky image and wonderful haiku. Congratulations on your win.