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The Wolf

Falling for/ Falling prey. An inverse poem.

By Rachael MacDonaldPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read
The Wolf
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It was frightening then.

That look of pure desire,

Heated cheeks flushed to chin,

Eyes of molten fire.

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A wolf escaping its darkened den,

Padding toward the rabbit’s briar,

Sardonic tongue sharply sanguine,

Toss me upon the pyre.

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As if I had a choice of men.

Would I opt for hedonistic quagmire,

The things I can’t- the things I can,

Is my head the actual liar?

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My life and limb became yours- when?

Untainted gift wrought to inspire?

Why do you love me again and again?

One's own personal rectifier.

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It was frightening then.

That look of pure desire,

Heated cheeks flushed to chin,

Eyes of molten fire.

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Rachael MacDonald

Avid Reader, Sometimes Poet, Occasional Writer, and searcher of truths often lost in the breaths between candy-coated lies.

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Outstanding

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  • Joe O’Connor2 years ago

    I like how the opening and close mirror each other, and this feels like a predatory advance, with the wolf and the hare. This particular line “My life and limb became yours- when?” is a rebuttal of the possessive partner. A serious and thought-provoking poem Rachael 🙌

  • Joe Patterson2 years ago

    Creative play on words.

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    This is great. Well done.

  • Mason Darnielle2 years ago

    Wolves are so radical! well done

  • Deasun T. Smyth2 years ago

    Incredible, and so well written. Well done.

  • Daphsam2 years ago

    Very beautiful and dynamic.

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