You make me feel like the first time I heard a Disney song as a kid. The sound hits different when you realize now that all the magical stuff you remember about
was merely a dream that everyone shared, but I felt that it was only mine
Like your love.
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Sunlight danced softly across the frost-crusted fields, making the little blades of grass sparkle like emeralds. The faraway chirrup of a songbird was the only disruption to the quiet of the morning. An icy chill, the last vestige of the dying winter, clung to the air, settling in a thick white mist at the far side of the open field. The heavy stench of decay hung in that mist, punctuation by the sharp tang of freshly spilled blood.
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Melancholy, nostalgic and delightful!!! Love this!!!❤️❤️💕
This made my heart ache because it was so relatable! Loved your poem!
Oh, this is pure nostalgia wrapped in love! That childhood magic may have been shared, but the way it felt? Totally yours—just like this love. Dreamy and delightful!
Disney brings back my childhood memories, and your short poem did, too.
Ooof, this punches hard, in a good way. So sweet and earnest.
Nice work . Please check my stories out as well if you get a chance.
I agree! Disney songs are magical! Great work!
That feeling of nostalgia hits deeper when you understand the magic behind the music.