Unbreakable bonds
The impact left either makes it or breaks it.
By Thavien YliasterPublished 3 years ago • 1 min read
Photo by Shane Rounce on Unsplash
Falling through the air
Surface tension of water
Feels just like concrete
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Author's Notes: This poem is inspired by Joe Patterson's Haiku, "Nature's Pain."
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Excellent! I loved the impact of feeling like hitting that hard wall while reading it! Ok, maybe I didn't love the feeling so much as your ability to make it feel that way, lol!
Excellent! I hearted and subscribed... And Ouch! It does feel like concrete. Definitely a learning experience if it wasn't intentional.