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Up From the Bottom

To Break the Surface

By Amanda StarksPublished 7 months ago 1 min read

I've been under for quite a while now,

drifting in the deep dark -

the cold of the endless silence

like a peaceful slumber.

Monotony can be nice

especially when it's so far below

away from the heat;

the blinding light.

But when I take a breath

and let the cold waters rush in,

I still watch the bubbles escape

up, up, and up;

far above this bottomless ocean,

and I wonder what it might be like

to see them reach the surface.

To see how their inner light might come to life

in the rippling waves of the sun;

how the dark might break away

and let those gasps of air

break the surface of the ocean

for the very first time.

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About the Creator

Amanda Starks

Fantasy writer, poet, and hopefully soon-to-be novelist who wants to create safe spaces to talk about mental health. Subscribe to my free newsletter at www.amandastarks.com for updates!

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  • Matthew J. Fromm7 months ago

    Ahh freaking men to this: Monotony can be nice especially when it's so far below away from the heat; the blinding light.

  • There's something fishy about this one..., ...& I love it!

  • This was hauntingly beautiful—like holding your breath with hope. The imagery of rising bubbles and hidden light captures the quiet courage it takes to surface. A stunning reflection on emerging from darkness.

  • This felt so liberating and empowering! Loved your poem!

  • Annie Edwards 7 months ago

    Beautiful!

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