Venomous
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Your loveโs toxic, a
Beautifully disguised trap
Hidden in plain sight
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Your heart is full of
A cruel life-threatening bile
That you use on me
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The darkness in your
Soul rotting as it erodes
With poisonous fangs
๐น
Firmly encircled
Corrupting the innocent
With venomous lies
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Manipulating
Dangerously with hidden
Lethal intentions
๐น
I must say goodbye
Before the death-dealing kiss
Itโs time to choose me
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Comments (16)
Yes indeed choose yourself!!! Love the power this has. ๐๐พ๐๐พ๐๐พโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
This is so full of fire and is not suffering fools gladly! As Caroline said, that last line lands the whole thing perfectly. Great job, MC!
I love the bite this has to it MC!! Nicely done!!
That's a really powerful last line! Well done!
Powerful! And that photo! Wow!โค๏ธ
You know me so well, Mother. Blessings. Be well.
Powerful & fabulously-written Mother! ๐ช๐พ๐๐
And that picture seals the deal...another fantastic power poem
Well-wrought! Been there. Done that. Lost the t-shirt in the divorce.
Wow, Combs! This was poignant! Love it! ๐๐
This is intense! The last stanza is amazing! โจ๐ And the image is wonderful l!
Oh my! This one really stings. The bite of the snake for sure.
Whoaaaa, this was so powerful! Loved your poem! And that cover image is so cool! Is it real or made with AI?
This is a sensational poem. And that pic is striking (pun intended)! Love it!! โก๐โก
That love had more bite than blissโgood thing you saw the fangs before the final strike!
This is phenomenal, I love the danger โก another great one!