Watch Me Spit Venom
Art made from insult (An Acrostic-Limerick)
Sometimes we gotta take the high road
No, you wouldn't understand because you're a toad
AI-Generated content and comments galore
Know that you cannot make fools of us anymore
Eventually, even the best masks corrode
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Author's Notes
All I can say is, if you know you know 😝😝😝
This Acrostic-Limerick combo was written for the National Poetry Month Challenge by Natasha Collazo.
An Acrostic is a poem where the first letter of each line spells out a word or phrase when read vertically.
A Limerick is a humorous five-line poem with just one stanza. Limericks have an AABBA rhyme scheme and a bouncy rhythm.
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Comments (133)
Like it. AI does not live the human experience with setbacks, accidents, mistakes and eventual triumphs. It's writing always lacks real emotional empathy.
Amazing. Well done. Great. Hugs
This is fierce. I love it
You completely nailed it here.
I somehow missed this one! But better late than never. Many of them around. A clever acrostic, my friend.
Straight to the point - excellent
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Love the words and how in a short form and naturally wise You composed it is missing a Top Story :) Congratulations on it !
Love the words and how in a short form and naturally wise You composed it is missing a Top Story :) Congratulations on it !
Trying to go through content I haven't seen yet since I was missing for so long lol... And I LOVE this! I HATE AI. I do not consider it a form of art. It's plagiarism pure and doesn't deserve any spotlight. I'm sad to see vocal is so intertwined with it. I really have to seek out quality content here now as it's all AI or get rich quick nonsense. Sad.
So true! And Cillian Murphy is awesome!!!
Awesome acrostic poem!!!❤️❤️💕
Miss hearing from you and reading your work. Hope you are all good. Just seeing if you had written anything ! 😀
Absolutely enjoyed the heck outta this one! And that meme about people and shit is fire truth 😁 YAYS and thanks my friend!
I must admire the creativity behind your critiques
Inspired! I love your work, Dharr!
"Eventually, even the best masks corrode" is such a good line, and this doesn't hold back. Hope they got the message!
REAL. I hate AI generated content.
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Your words truly touched me. If you ever have a moment, I’d love for you to glance at my first story — I’m new here.
nice story
Venom...not everyone has poetic talent or writing talent. People just need to find something they are good at.
This hits in every line! Maybe you were a snake in your previous life, but in this one you're a powerful wordsmith.
You have a most interesting way of spitting venom!
Love this! Killin’ it as usual!