When Winter Woke
A Tautogram
When Winter woke,
We watched,
While wind whistled,
While wildflowers wilted,
While water widened whole.
We watched,
While white was whisked wherever,
While wee wrens wandered wherever warm was,
While women wove with wool.
When Winter woke,
We whispered,
"Welcome."
While we wondered,
Why?
When Winter woke.
About the Creator
Nani
Nani is a writer based out of Massachusetts. She enjoys writing fiction stories and all kinds of poetry.
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A Love Forboding
The chipped stone slope caused unbearable footing. I slid, skirting on my heels. I cast my shield, relinquishing my guard to stay upright. Left with my double-edge and a prayer to the maker, I skated toward my objective. The earthly stubble gave way to solid ground. I found myself restored, a trail of dust in my wake.
By James U. Rizzi4 days ago in Fiction
Comments (8)
Power to Runner UP COOL RULES. HUGS
This is so stunning!
So beautiful. Congrats on runner up 👍🏼
Congrats on your placement! Well done. 😊
Beautiful and vivid imagery, Deanna! Congrats on your placement in the challenge!!
Congrats on runner up.
Congratulation on runner up!!!
This was both very deep and beautifully written. Loved your Tautogram!