“Wittle Green Frogs” 🌧🍃🐸🌧
‘Playing in magical rain filled puddles’ - For Mother Combs’ Unofficial 6W6L “November Rain Challenge”
By Grz ColmPublished 2 years ago • Updated 2 years ago • 1 min read
Image by mateya from Pixabay
“I’m stomping on wittle-green-frogs”,
“My new waincoat keeps me dry”,
“It’s fun playing in the wain”,
“Mum said it’s okay (I think..)”
“I really really wuv the wain -”,
“Do you like the wain too?”
Notes: This is my very humble little attempt at Mother Combs’ unoffical “November Rain challenge”, inspired by her chosen image above and using the 6W6L structure (six lines, each with six words).
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Grz Colm
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Comments (28)
I hear and feel the child’s authentic voice. Love it! Pauline 🌸
Such a cute, poem… so well done for the challenge & photo.
Adorable! 😁
This was so clever and, yes, cute. I like the way you think.
Wow, that was adorable!
Adorable! Super clever to write it in the little boy's voice. I love this!
This was so good, love the fact you choose to do it from a child's perspective and with a childlike voice. Great great entry into this challenge. Well done, sir!
This was a cute poem, I like the narrative voice you chose for it! It was fun and brought a smile to my face! 😊
me wuv the wittle gween poem. So vewwy gweat. Hello Gwrz.
This is adorable 💜💜💜
Cute!
Cute and very endearing and innocent 💙Anneliese
Oh my goodness. That is so sweet. You brought the picture to life. Wonderful job.
That was cute
This just so adorable! Love it!
Why is he stomping on those wittle green frogs? 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
I love the rain..., but stomping on little green frogs? My heart breaks even as I remember how innocent & authentic that is to childhood.
AWWWWW
Omg! This piece warmed my heart! Awesome job G!
Ah, so cute. I wuv the wain too. Takes me back to days with my little people.
Perfect! A child’s playful imagination. Very well done, my friend.
Cute! Cute! Cute! I love it.
Excellent job 🥰
Soooo cuteeee!
So cute, Grz! Love this little poem, and the sweet voice of the child. Precious! 💞💫