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Whispers in White

The way home.

By Abody N. EiidPublished 2 years ago 2 min read
Whispers in White
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Whispers in White

The crunch of boots echoed in the pristine stillness, each footstep a stark imprint on the unbroken canvas of snow. The pines stood sentinel, cloaked in ermine, their boughs heavy with frosted silence. Anya pulled her fur tighter, the air a crisp caress against her exposed cheeks.

She'd been walking for hours, the rising sun painting the horizon in hues of rose and gold. Yet, the village remained stubbornly out of sight. Panic, a cold serpent, began to coil in her gut. Had the blizzard shifted the landmarks? Was she lost, swallowed whole by this endless expanse of white?

A crow cawed, a harsh dissonance in the hushed symphony. It circled overhead, then swooped, landing atop a snow-laden branch. It cocked its obsidian head, its gaze unwavering. Anya, desperate, felt a primal urge to follow.

As if guided by an unseen hand, she veered off the well-trodden path, following the crow's erratic flight. It dipped and soared, leading her deeper into the frosted labyrinth. Doubt gnawed at her, but the alternative – succumbing to the cold embrace of the night – was far grimmer.

Then, a glint of light pierced the white veil. A lone cabin, smoke curling from its chimney, materialized from the swirling snow. Relief washed over Anya, warm and sudden. The crow cawed once more, a triumphant sound, before taking flight into the cerulean canvas.

As Anya approached the cabin, the door creaked open, revealing a wizened woman with eyes as warm as the firelight spilling from within. "Lost, child?" she asked, her voice a gentle rumble. Anya could only nod, tears pricking her eyes.

The woman ushered her inside, the scent of spices and warmth enveloping her. Anya sank onto a fur rug, the cold seeping from her bones. As she sipped steaming tea, the woman spoke of the crow, a creature of both wisdom and mischief, a guardian of those who strayed.

That night, nestled beneath a quilt of down, Anya dreamt of crows and snowy vistas. She understood, then, that her journey wasn't just about finding her way home, but about finding faith in the whispers of the wild, the unexpected turns that life, like the wind-driven snow, could bring.

The next morning, the sun glinted off a familiar path, leading back to the village. Anya turned one last time to the cabin, now shrouded in mist. The crow was gone, but its message, etched in the white canvas of her heart, remained.

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Abody N. Eiid

hey, I'm a copywriter. I'm here to write in different fields where I can develop my writing over the long term so that at the end of each month i can see what experience I have accumulated based on your evaluation of me.

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