Critique

Cityscape
Here is my pencil sketch of a small city or a town that I did free hand. I learned how to draw this in an Art class I had during my freshman year in high school or it could have been during middle school. Please comment on this and I would really appreciate it.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Art
Explore the most beautiful caves in the world
Harrison's Cave in the Caribbean island of Barbados is the only cave in the world with water flowing along multi-colored crystal-like shapes. The erosion of limestone blocks creates many large and small caves, with rock niches, lakes, streams and waterfalls.
By Ken Daklak2 years ago in Art
The Garden
Once again I have tried to describe all the rooms of a house along with the front porch. I thought one more and it is about the garden in the yard.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Art
Front Porch
I tried to describe all the rooms in the house from the attic to the basement. Let's move outside to the front porch. Front door
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Art
The Pantry and Closets
There are two rooms of houses that some would really consider rooms but I think I will try to describe. Closets and Pantry
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Art
The Bedroom
The Bedroom is next for I have covered the major rooms of the house. so here goes. Blankets and pillows, electric and regular
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Art
The Bathroom. Content Warning.
I have tried to describe different ways of the various rooms of the houses we live. I have tried to describe the Attic, the Basement, The Kitchen, The Family Living Room. I am going to try 'The Bathroom' and then 'The Bedroom'.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Art
Family Living Room
We had the Attic, Basement, Kitchen now I am going to attempt the Family Living Room. 'Family Living Room' Familiar things
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Art
The Kitchen
Well, I covered the attic and the basement. I thought now I would try another room of the house. 'The Kitchen' Kleptomania over spices of
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Art
The Basement
To go along with 'The Attic" here is an acrostic about 'The Basement'. Borrowed or old materials that accumulate steadily and
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Art
The Attic
This is not a part of my micro fiction story, but an acrostic I thought for the work itself. Allowing for accumulation of memories
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Art
Trauma Carnival . Top Story - May 2024. Content Warning.
I have unpopular opinions on one of my old favorites, The L Word. First is: Jenny is my favorite character. Second: The show was originally about Jenny, her trauma, her broken identity and the way her sexuality was explored as an awakening that brought up many memories of childhood abuse.
By Melissa Ingoldsby2 years ago in Art