Season after endless grueling season, groups of self-important, horny arrogant brats fight to stay alive in dumbass competitions for the love of money. Yes, money. They don’t really give a damn about the bachelor/bachelorette. They just want to get laid - and to win.
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😅🤣😅🤣 Well said andI couldn't agree more!!
Exactly this! I despise reality shows, lol. Loved it :)
Very accurate
A very generous review, I feel 😁
Haha love that since of humor!
LOL!!!!!!!!! I agree completely with this.
Exactly right, that gave me a great chuckle. Grueling for all involved, and endless. I guess they often just serve as domestic background noise.
Oh no… 🤣 You just made me cackle in a coffee shop. Yep, that sums up these reality shows.
Why they pass me by, nice critique
Not all of them are about getting laid. (All of them do seem to be about money &/or fame.) And MTV's "The Real World" was fairly interesting.
Hahahahahahahhaha this is soooo true! You freaking nailed this!
LOL! 😂😂😂😂I absolutely love this!
LOL!!!
Honest & humorous!!! Love this!!!❤️❤️💕
Funny and entertaining!
I agree, completely! I have wasted only about 30 +- minutes of my life on those dumb shows - and it's still too much! 🙀
This is so true and so funny the way you wrote it! Great work
Great job and right on target!
Ok yes, this. It’s so. Over. Dramatic.
😂😂😂 “Cathy’s shit-pile list” I love this critique, and I completely agree!
Hilaious and true! Well done
🤣Omg, Awesome 😎Great job,Cathy!
I think you are holding back on your true feelings. 🤣🤪
OMG, Buddy! Nailed it! Well done and this made me chuckle! I knew as soon as I saw the title it was going to be you giving it both barrels! Awesome!