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Advice Needed: A Yam's Tale
Hello there, everyone! I am once again taking another break from my regularly scheduled fiction to publish something in the new critique community. It was created by Vocal at a perfect time for me as, sat within my memory stick, a small story opening has existed. The problem with it is... I have no idea where to go with it!
By ThatWriterWoman3 years ago in Critique
Nostalgia on Wheels: The Most Popular Vehicles of the 1980s
The 1980s marked an era of bold fashion, vibrant music, and iconic pop culture moments. Alongside these trends, the automotive industry saw the rise of some of the most unforgettable vehicles that continue to evoke nostalgia among enthusiasts and collectors today. From muscle cars to compact hatchbacks, the 1980s had something for everyone. Let's take a journey back in time and explore the most popular vehicles that left an indelible mark on this vibrant decade.
By Justin Tardif3 years ago in Critique
Builderall 5.0 vs. Rapid Profit Machine: Choosing the Perfect Digital Marketing Duo
In the ever-evolving landscape of digital marketing, having the right tools at your disposal can make all the difference in achieving success. Two powerful contenders that have been gaining traction are Builderall 5.0 and Rapid Profit Machine (RPM). These platforms promise to transform your digital marketing endeavors and take your business to new heights. In this comprehensive guide, we'll delve into the features, benefits, and user experiences of Builderall 5.0 and Rapid Profit Machine, helping you make an informed choice for your digital marketing needs.
By XcellentWrite3 years ago in Critique
Crisis in the Amazon
Are we living our lives as if every day is a new fairytale unfolding. Granted, some fairy tales are far more wonderful for some than for others. There are people surviving day to day in not so fairytale like conditions, yet are doing more for the ecological survival of the planet than those who seem completely oblivious to warnings of "Less is More". If we are to continue to survive safely, we need to wake up to the reality of that which is unfolding around us. This is not a storied fairytale.
By Novel Allen3 years ago in Critique
Avoid These Common Mistakes at Your Social Security Disability Consultative Exam
Avoid These Common Mistakes at Your Social Security Disability Consultative Exam If you're seeking benefits, you'll want to avoid any missteps during your Social Security Disability Consultative Exam. It's a key stage in the process! This exam can determine whether or not you'll receive the benefits you need. But don't worry, we're here to guide you. We've gathered the most common mistakes people make. Armed with this knowledge, you can approach your consultative exam with confidence and increase your chances of success. Let's dive in and learn how to avoid these pitfalls.
By Jason Baril3 years ago in Critique
Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs.
One day Snow White a very special little girl with a rather controlling mother in law, who despised her, as she desired all Snow Whites fathers love and affection for herself. preceeds to send her into the woods to collect daffodils.
By Dawn Earnshaw3 years ago in Critique
Inspiring Success Stories of a Teen Entrepreneur
The Early Spark of Entrepreneurship From a young age, our girl CEO displayed a remarkable spark of entrepreneurship. She always had a flair for spotting opportunities and thinking outside the box. Whether it was selling homemade crafts or launching a small online venture, her passion for business was evident.
By Pepe Magic3 years ago in Critique
Nowhere Else to Stop
Edmund was a rising star, welcomed like a lost child by the film world. The papers were crazy over him like a dog with a new toy. There wasn’t much else a 21-year-old could wish for. He had the looks, the fame… and the MONEY! He sure had a heavy wallet. Who would’ve thought two movies in three years could get him where he was? Like the sun in the early hours of the day, Ed’s rise was inevitable.
By Josh E.3 years ago in Critique
Work
Consider yourself a "lazy" person but still want to start working from home, don't worry! There are steps you can take to overcome laziness and create a successful work-from-home routine. Here's how you can get started:
By Ilya KozinetS3 years ago in Critique
A Sapphic Story I wrote in 2008
Carol Patience sighed as her back was fixed against the purple sheets on the bed. The seventeen year old thought it was a very strange way to celebrate her birthday. Lying on her bed, semi naked whilst her girlfriend, was somewhere around the flat. Carol stood up and stared at herself at the rectangle shaped mirror on the wall. She certainly noticed that her changes from two years ago. Never would she have thought that she would have a girlfriend, around twice her age. Carol was fourteen when she first met Grace Butterfly, after being bit by a snake and found her self out of planet earth.
By Chloe Gilholy3 years ago in Critique
Peculiar
Careful-careful-careful! Walk straight... - Watch out! Come on, start the car. Drive slowly...avoid the bumps. Dumpy! Huh!
By umamanidrah3 years ago in Critique
A Christmas Story Review
Since the Holidays are coming up, I thought I’d review a film which I think is perfectly appropriate for the occasion. And what better title to review than the timeless classic known as “A Christmas Story”? Since this movie was released in the year I was born in, this is yet another film that I’ve known pretty much my whole life. And I have seen this movie at least several times during my childhood. Now, what made this movie so special is that it wasn't really a Christmas story as the title implies, but rather, it was a drama with a few moments of humor here and there. And once you start watching it, you will quickly realize this isn’t your typical Christmas themed movie. It doesn’t revolve around the legend of Santa Claus and the myth about him traveling across the world to bring toys to children. No, this is a more realistic story that tells us that sometimes what we want isn’t really what we need. Originally released November 18th, 1983, this film is set in the 1940s, long before the time of the film's release, and long before digital age which we live in today. Anyway, the story in this film is basically a drama story told in the form of a narration by Ralphie when he has come of age, as he shares his childhood experiences with the audience about what happened to him on that particular day during the Holiday season. And needless to say, it was a Christmas that he would remember for a VERY long time. And let me tell you, this movie sure has left quite an impression on me that lasted for just as long. I watched this movie 30 years ago as a kid. And 30 years later, it’s high time I did a review of it. Though, keep in mind, I haven’t seen this movie in ages despite that I remember very specific parts of it by heart. So forgive me if some or all of these scenes are not in the correct order.
By Kylecovey Smith3 years ago in Critique