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Shush the noise.

Breath and relax

By Marie381Uk Published 9 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

Shush the noise.

I sit here, quite happy, listening to next door powerwashing his garden. My husband upstairs steam cleaning the bathroom floor. In between, when the noise quietens, the bird singing proudly. It’s summer. The sun shines, my heart’s filled with gratitude and love. I am here and alive.

See, sometimes we wake up wrapped in our downs and don’t see the simplest things that are a joy happening on our own doorstep. Meditation is changing my outlook for the better.

In this world, we all need a mind filter to sway our overthinking of bad to the good side. Instead of dwelling, let’s be glad for being here alive and give thanks for what we have got.

Below is a little something I hope you will enjoy

Breath and Stillness

She sits still,

the world’s noise soft around her,

a bird calls,

the day hums gently,

and her breath finds a calm place.

Sunlight touches her skin,

warmth fills her quiet heart,

she watches the garden wake,

and lets the small joys

take root inside her.

Thoughts come like clouds,

some dark, some bright,

she learns to watch,

not chase or hold,

letting peace grow between.

The noise fades,

her mind clears,

she smiles at the stillness,

knowing this moment,

is enough, is whole.

She is here,

alive with the simple things,

the quiet, the light,

the steady beating

of a grateful heart.

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About the Creator

Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Jenny Dall8 months ago

    This is a beautiful piece. It makes me think about how often we miss out on the simple joys around us. I've been there, too busy to notice the little things. How can we be more mindful like this in our daily lives? And what are some easy ways to start? Meditation sounds like a great way to change our outlook. I wonder if there are other simple practices we can try. Maybe taking a few minutes each day to just sit and listen to the world around us? It's inspiring to see how focusing on the present can bring so much gratitude. I'm gonna try to be more aware of the small pleasures in my own life from now on.

  • Seema Patel9 months ago

    I relate to it, as I see noises, bad smells, unpleasant things along with the beautiful ones. We have to filter and glean the joyful ones.

  • Rohitha Lanka9 months ago

    Fantastic!!!

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