Art
The Open Book
There on the table was an open book. As the people were walking around the room no one noticed what was sticking up from the middle. There was this one brave person that decided to go up to the desk and peek. At that moment a slight breeze fluttered the loose sheet to the floor. The person picked it up, looked at it, and read silently. The person couldn't believe what they read. "Please do not touch the book!" It is very fragile, and one cannot touch without gloves. Yes, this is story of a visit to a book museum.
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Halloween
Horrifying anxiety letting loose other worldly entities entering neverland. _____________ There was this one All Hallow's Eve that no body could be found. Why do you suppose this happened. Could it have been that they did not follow the rules that were stated one night, or could it have been that there was a sense that they were being watched, but what was watching them? They were afraid to ask and did not really want an answer, but they had to know. They listened to each, and it occurred to them that what was watching them was each other's bodies.
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
AI Generated Stories On Vocal? Seriously, What Is The Point?
Introduction When I see that a story is AI-generated it is a red flag to me, something to avoid. Today I have seen a lot on Vocal, and yes they are flagging themselves but seriously what is the point? I don't want to read something that someone couldn't be bothered to write.
By Mike Singleton 💜 Mikeydred about a year ago in Critique
Is His Secret Obsession Legit? A Critical Analysis
In the realm of relationship advice and self-help, the book His Secret Obsession by James Bauer has garnered significant attention. It's marketed as a guide for women seeking to understand male psychology, with the ultimate goal of fostering stronger, more fulfilling romantic relationships. But, as with many products in this genre, questions arise: Is His Secret Obsession legit? Does it deliver on its promises, or is it simply another attempt to capitalize on people's emotional vulnerabilities?
By Alvin V. Stoneabout a year ago in Critique
Just for Fun! 2
What would the world do without its greatest invention known as the safety pin? First, there will be a lot of babies back in the days before disposable diapers mothers would have to figure a way to fasten their baby's diaper well, but what a hassle that would be. I guess they could use buttons. Well, for another thing when pants happen to lose a button, or a zipper is broken there would be no way of securing it closed. Wouldn't that be a hoot if caught on the outside. Then it was a good thing that it was invented.
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Just for Fun! 3
The circus was his life and Harold, the clown, wondered what he was going to do when the circus was sold to another owner for, he knew that he was getting up in age and soon would retire. Harold knew there were a few things he needed to check up on with the boss. The manager of the circus wanted to talk to Harold the next day anyhow about something. He would ask him then. The next day Harold met the manager, and wouldn't you know it he suggested to Harold that he retire and receive his benefits for retirement.
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Just for Fun!
There was a woman named Mary and for some reason she is leaving a room that meant everything to her. Then why am I leaving that is a good question for one to ask. One reason could be there was a fight that she did not want to remember, then again it could be a room that something sad occurred, but then again, the room could just be a room that one could love but seems to be feeling not just right. Could it be that she will remember this room that she loved but cannot stay there no longer.
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
