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whistleblower's triumph
Once upon a time, in the bustling city of Ethica, there lived a mild-mannered accountant named Oliver Inkwell. Oliver worked for the prestigious firm, Sterling Solutions, where he spent his days crunching numbers and his nights dreaming of spreadsheets. However, little did he know that his meticulous nature would lead him down a path of unexpected adventure and, ultimately, triumph over corruption.
By Jacob Mhango2 years ago in Critique
WHY??? 01 million people died
After 1845, the British government in London controlled Ireland and implemented various policies that caused the famine. These included importing food from North America, which did not provide enough nutrition for the starving population, as well as constructing public works projects that required long hours of manual labor. This relief only made things worse, as it led to increased maternal and child mortality and exported Ireland's food. In 1846, Ireland's weather patterns changed and the potato crop suffered from blight. The UK policy of relief changed in1847and local taxes were raised to cover costs. By 1850, the famine had ended and over 1 million people had died.
By Fatima Khalid2 years ago in Critique
The Great Balloon Release Disaster of 1986: Lessons Learned from Cleveland's Helium Fiasco
In the chronicles of exposure stunts turned out badly, the disastrous arrival of 1.5 million helium-filled inflatables over the city of Cleveland on September 27, 1986, remains as an obvious sign of the unusual results that can go with even the most benevolent undertakings. What started as an endeavor to establish a worldwide best for the biggest inflatable delivery immediately transformed into a fiasco that had broad ramifications for the city and its inhabitants.
By Raven Bautista2 years ago in Critique
Strategies to Make Your "Vocal Writing Awards" Submissions EVEN BETTER. Top Story - September 2023.
You’ve poured yourself into creating an amazing story. You've read it through several times. Yet perhaps you hesitate before pressing “submit,” wondering: What could I do to make it even better?
By Sonia Heidi Unruh2 years ago in Critique











