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Dhoni's IPL 2024 so far
MS Dhoni, the legendary finisher and former captain of the Chennai Super Kings (CSK), entered IPL 2024 with a question mark hanging over his head. Speculation swirled about it being his final season, further fueled by him stepping down as captain and handing the reins to Ruturaj Gaikwad.
By Pavan Kumar2 years ago in Critique
Former CIA Doctor Reveals Military Deaths Caused by UFOs. Content Warning.
In the murky corridors of government secrecy, Dr. Christopher Green embarked on a quest for truth that would shake the very foundations of our understanding of the cosmos. It began with a bombshell revelation: hundreds of American servicemen had suffered injury or death after encounters with anomalous unidentified craft. As a neuroimaging expert with decades of experience, Dr. Green had seen his fair share of mysteries, but nothing could have prepared him for this.
By Gunduz2 years ago in Critique
Critique Requested: "The Kelpie"
Begging for critique! Overall, I like The Kelpie, but the opening of Part One feels rambling and completely all over the place. It needs toightening, and I'm floundering. Which bits would you cut? Is there anything that pulls you out of the story? Does it matter that I haven't named the town or village where she lives? Is that a flaw?
By L.C. Schäfer2 years ago in Critique
The Iron Claw Is The Best Wrestling Film of This Decade . Content Warning.
This past weekend, I decided to go to the movies with my brother. From there, we both chose to see The Iron Claw. For those unaware of the film’s plot, it details the lives and tragedies of the Von Erich wrestling family. Zac Efron stars as Kevin Von Erich, the oldest Von Erich, with Jeremy Allen White as Kerry Von Erich, Harris Dickinson as David Von Erich, Stanley Simons as Mike Von Erich, and Holt McCallany as Fritz Von Erich, the father of the Von Erich. Along with them is Lily James as Pam Adkisson and Maura Tierney as Doris Von Erich, the mother of the Von Erich.
By Bass Man Eddie2 years ago in Critique
Deconstructing Atheism
"Professor John Lennox's Insightful Analysis" The relationship between belief in God and rational evidence Some thinkers argue that we must make a choice between God and science, much like choosing between Henry Ford and Engineering as an explanation for the motor car. In this discussion at the Oxford Union, Professor John Lennox presents a compelling case for God, providing dense content for serious contemplation.
By Nicolas J.D2 years ago in Critique
Revenge stories. Content Warning.
There are multiple types of revenge, including ruthless revenge, calculated revenge, and revenge stories that may be considered extreme.
By Nicolas J.D2 years ago in Critique
2024
Introduction These are some thoughts on things that I might accomplish in 2024. Nothing will be nailed down bar looking after my health and being there for people who need me.
By Mike Singleton 💜 Mikeydred 2 years ago in Critique
The Top 10 Movies of 2023
As the year unfurls, the universe of film keeps on stunning crowds with a different exhibit of narrating, dazzling visuals, and uncommon exhibitions. The year 2023 has shown to be no exemption, with producers pushing the limits of innovativeness and development. Here is a brief look into the main 10 motion pictures that have caught the hearts and brains of crowds all over the planet.
By R Roka2 years ago in Critique
God's Plan. Content Warning.
Introduction This will be controversial and probably lose me a lot more friends, but that is life. So What Is Going On?
By Mike Singleton 💜 Mikeydred 2 years ago in Critique
Maggie's Law of the Laundromat
The local Laundromat had always been a minefield for Zara. The month of October even more so. She found herself ignoring her laundry until there was nothing left to ignore. Her hamper became so overstuffed, she’d fight her way through almost every door. That night at the laundromat it took four tackles just to get through. Her underwear launched themselves onto the floor, one of her bras believed it could fly and flew. It hooked itself on the head of a person’s wavy cloud of hair.
By BBW2 years ago in Critique
Shadows Of Justice
In the small, struggling nation of Eloria, where the sun seemed to hesitate before casting its feeble rays upon the worn-out streets, a group of unlikely heroes emerged from the shadows. Eloria was a country burdened by poverty, its people yearning for a glimmer of hope amid the pervasive corruption that had seeped into every layer of government.
By Jacob Mhango2 years ago in Critique
whistleblower's triumph
Once upon a time, in the bustling city of Ethica, there lived a mild-mannered accountant named Oliver Inkwell. Oliver worked for the prestigious firm, Sterling Solutions, where he spent his days crunching numbers and his nights dreaming of spreadsheets. However, little did he know that his meticulous nature would lead him down a path of unexpected adventure and, ultimately, triumph over corruption.
By Jacob Mhango2 years ago in Critique