Panty Raid
For the Oh Jeff Flash Fiction Challenge
“Oh, Jeff…. I love you too… but … I can’t marry someone who keeps a collection of used panties in their bedside night stand.”
‘But… babe, I’m willing to replace them all with yours… Well, except for mama’s…”
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Andrew C McDonald
Andrew McDonald was a 911 dispatcher for 30 yrs with a B.S. in Math (1985). He served as an Army officer 1985 to 1992, honorably exiting a captain.
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Comments (6)
Creepy much, Jeff. Don't shame Mommas everywhere. Ah Jeff, the tricks you get up to.
This one made me chuckle... while also feeling a little uncomfortable. Great interpretation of the challenge and so well done in so few words.
Ewww, the most gross version of Mommy’s Boy 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Except Mama’s. Best line Nice one glad you got this one in
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This made me laugh so much lol mamas lol