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The Seventh-Floor Pause

A building’s quiet routine, and the cost of touching the wrong button.

By Lawrence LeasePublished about 9 hours ago 13 min read
The Seventh-Floor Pause
Photo by Arisa Chattasa on Unsplash

The elevator in the Rookery Building was older than the people who rode it. The brass numbers above the door had dulled into the color of old pennies, and the mirror at the back held everyone’s face a second too long, like it was deciding whether to keep them.

Mara learned the first day without anyone telling her.

She arrived at 8:47, coffee in one hand, badge still stiff on its lanyard. The lobby smelled like lemon polish and the faint mineral bite of radiator heat. A security guard sat behind the desk with a newspaper folded so precisely it might’ve been ironed.

A line of tenants waited at the elevator. Not a long line—seven people, maybe eight—but nobody pressed the button. Nobody spoke above a hush. Their shoes pointed forward. Their eyes held the soft, practiced patience of people waiting for a bus they didn’t trust.

Mara stepped around them and tapped the call button.

The click of it was small, but in the lobby it sounded like a coin dropped in a church.

The woman nearest Mara—silver hair, wool coat, elegant scarf—didn’t look at her. She didn’t have to. She simply raised her chin the smallest fraction and let out a slow breath, as if she’d smelled smoke.

Two people behind Mara’s shoulder shifted. Someone cleared their throat, then stopped midway, like they’d remembered the wrong language.

The security guard lowered his paper an inch. His eyes met Mara’s with an expression that wasn’t angry, exactly. It was the look you give a toddler reaching toward a candle.

Mara’s cheeks warmed. “Sorry,” she said, half-laughing, as if there was a joke she’d missed. “I—I thought…”

No one corrected her. No one explained.

The elevator arrived with a tired groan and slid open.

Still, nobody moved.

Mara hesitated at the threshold. The inside smelled faintly of oil and rain-wet wool. A man in a tan overcoat stood near the control panel, hand hovering—not pressing anything, just holding.

The silver-haired woman stepped in first. Then the man with the newspaper tucked under his arm. Then the rest, one by one, in a smooth, quiet order.

Mara stepped in last.

Inside, bodies arranged themselves without looking. There was a space in the center nobody stood in. People faced the doors, evenly, like they’d been placed.

Mara glanced at the button panel. There were numbers from B to 12. Her office was on the ninth.

She reached for it.

The man in the tan overcoat didn’t move fast. He simply shifted his wrist, the way someone might place a hand over a child’s when guiding them to write their name. His fingers didn’t touch Mara’s; they hovered in the air between her and the buttons, a polite barrier.

His voice was low. “It’s all right,” he said, like he was calming her down after a near accident. “We’ll get you there.”

Mara withdrew her hand as if the metal had shocked her.

The man pressed a button with two fingers, clean and deliberate.

The elevator began to rise.

The numbers flickered in their little window above the doors. The building creaked around them. Everyone stood very still, not stiff, not fearful—just…aligned.

Mara tried to make sense of it the way her brain always tried to make sense of things: by turning it into a system.

Maybe the button was broken unless a certain person pressed it.

Maybe there was some trick with the ancient mechanism.

Maybe—

The elevator passed 4, 5, 6.

At 7, it slowed and sighed. The doors opened.

Nobody moved. Nobody stepped out.

A woman near the back—round glasses, red lipstick, a tote bag with “Public Library” printed on it—shifted her weight and offered a brief, pleasant smile to the empty hallway.

Then the doors closed again.

The elevator continued upward.

Mara stared at the seam of the doors. She tried to keep her face neutral. She’d grown up learning when to keep quiet, when to let adults be weird around her without asking why.

At 9, the elevator stopped.

The doors opened to a carpeted hallway with a narrow window that looked out over the city. Dust motes drifted in a shaft of pale winter light.

No one spoke. No one turned.

Mara waited, expecting—what? A signal? A nod? A permission?

The man in the tan overcoat tilted his head toward the open doors. A small gesture. Almost kind.

Mara stepped out.

Behind her, the elevator doors closed, sealing her away from the warm presence of strangers who had all been in on something she wasn’t.

When she turned toward her suite, she saw something taped beside the door to the stairwell. A handwritten sign, the ink thick and careful.

Please use the stairs during fire drills.

Beneath it, in smaller print: Thank you for understanding.

Nothing about buttons. Nothing about lobbies. Nothing about elevators.

It made Mara feel, oddly, as if she’d imagined the entire thing.

On her second day, she came in at 8:53.

The line stood again, same mild patience, same quiet. The call button sat untouched.

Mara held her coffee a little tighter and took her place at the end of the line.

The silver-haired woman was there again. So was the security guard, his newspaper folded into the same clean rectangle.

The elevator arrived on its own.

No one pressed anything.

They stepped in. Mara stepped in last.

This time, she didn’t reach for the buttons. She didn’t even look at them. She watched the back of the man in the tan overcoat and waited.

He pressed something.

The elevator rose.

At 7, it stopped. Doors opened. The empty hallway waited.

The woman with the library tote smiled again—brief, polite, like she was acknowledging someone who wasn’t visible.

Then the doors shut.

At 9, Mara stepped out when the doors opened. The man in the tan overcoat gave her the same small, barely-there tilt of his head.

As Mara walked down the hall, she caught her reflection in the stairwell window. She looked like someone who belonged. Like someone who knew what to do.

It felt like wearing a borrowed coat that fit too well.

By the end of the week, Mara noticed other things.

In the lobby, everyone avoided the marble inlay near the center—an ornate compass rose pattern in black and cream stone. People walked around it in smooth arcs, as if it were wet. A delivery guy once cut straight across it, wheeling a dolly stacked with boxes. The wheels clattered over the stone.

A woman at the mailboxes inhaled sharply. Not a gasp—more like a swallowed warning.

The delivery guy kept moving. Nothing happened. No alarms. No sparks.

But when Mara passed the compass rose later, she saw a faint dampness on the marble, as if someone had wiped it with a cloth and left it to dry. The air above it seemed cooler.

She started to step around it too. Not because she believed anything would happen. Because everyone else did.

On Tuesday, her coworker Lina asked if she wanted to grab lunch.

“Sure,” Mara said, relieved. Lina was the closest thing Mara had found to a friend in the office. Lina wore bright earrings and talked about reality TV with the seriousness of politics. She rolled her chair back and forth with a little squeak that made Mara smile.

They waited for the elevator at noon.

A line had already formed. People stood as they always did: quiet, forward-facing, a soft space in the center of the lobby left undisturbed.

Mara and Lina stepped into the line.

Lina leaned close, voice low. “Okay,” she whispered. “So. I’ve been meaning to ask you.”

Mara’s stomach tightened. “Ask me what?”

Lina’s eyes flicked to the button. “Has anybody told you about—”

The elevator arrived. The doors opened.

The man in the tan overcoat stepped in first.

The line flowed behind him.

Lina stopped speaking like someone had pulled the plug. Her smile stayed on, but it turned into the kind of smile you wear in photos with distant relatives.

Inside the elevator, Mara waited for the familiar sequence.

The man pressed his button. The elevator rose.

At 7, it stopped. Doors opened to the empty hall.

And this time, someone stepped in.

A young man in a gray hoodie, earbuds in, holding a paper bag that smelled like fries and peppery ketchup. He moved quickly, head down, foot crossing the threshold without hesitation.

The air in the elevator changed. Not colder. Not hotter. Just…thinner.

The woman with the library tote’s polite smile froze halfway into being.

The young man glanced up, eyes flicking across the faces. “Oh. Sorry,” he mumbled around a mouthful of something. He jabbed at the button panel with a greasy finger. “Uh—ten.”

The button clicked. A loud, ugly sound.

Nobody moved. Nobody spoke.

The man in the tan overcoat’s hand drifted toward the panel and hovered there, not stopping him, not correcting him. He simply watched, expression calm the way a doctor might watch a patient ignore advice.

The elevator doors closed.

It rose.

7 became 8. 9. 10.

It stopped.

The doors opened.

The hallway beyond looked normal: carpet, fluorescent light, a framed watercolor of a lake.

The young man stepped out, still chewing. “Thanks,” he said to no one in particular, and walked away.

The elevator doors closed again.

No one exhaled. No one blinked.

Then the man in the tan overcoat pressed something.

The elevator began to descend.

Mara’s heart thudded. Lina’s hand found Mara’s wrist and gripped, firm. Lina’s nails were short, clean. Her palm was damp.

At 9, the elevator stopped, and Mara expected the doors to open. She expected her floor.

Instead, it passed 9. It passed 8.

At 7, it stopped.

The doors opened.

The empty hallway waited.

The woman with the library tote lifted her chin and smiled—this time, wider, as if greeting a familiar friend.

The air in the elevator seemed to settle back into itself, thickening again.

Then the doors shut.

The elevator rose.

At 9, it stopped. The doors opened.

The man in the tan overcoat tilted his head toward the hall.

Mara stepped out with Lina, both of them moving too fast, like they were escaping a room where a fight almost started.

In the hallway, Lina let go of Mara’s wrist and laughed, breathy and too loud.

“Okay,” Lina said, and her eyes were bright, her cheeks flushed. “Okay. So you saw that, right?”

Mara stared at her. “What was that?”

Lina’s laughter faded. She looked down the hall, then back, then lowered her voice to a whisper. “He pressed ten.”

“So?”

Lina’s mouth tightened. “So he…pressed it.”

Mara waited for more, but Lina just stared at her like Mara was being difficult on purpose.

“You can’t—” Lina started, then stopped. Her gaze flicked toward the elevator, as if the metal doors might open again and reveal someone listening.

She swallowed and tried again. “You just don’t do that.”

Mara’s skin prickled. “Why?”

Lina’s lips parted, then closed. Her jaw worked like she was trying to chew a word that didn’t fit.

“I don’t know,” Lina said finally, but her tone made it clear she did know something—something she couldn’t say, even in a hallway, even with nobody around. “You’ll get used to it.”

Mara wanted to push. She wanted to demand a sentence that started with because.

But she remembered the line in the lobby. The quiet. The way questions seemed to bounce off the air without landing.

She nodded instead. “Yeah,” she said, like she agreed.

At 4:30, Mara left her office with her bag and coat.

The hallway was empty. Her coworkers had filtered out quietly, as if they all timed their departures to avoid crowding each other.

In the lobby, the security guard was still there. His newspaper lay folded, untouched. The compass rose gleamed dully beneath the ceiling lights.

Mara walked toward the elevator.

For once, there was no line.

The call button sat there, waiting.

Mara stared at it.

She thought about the young man in the gray hoodie. He hadn’t exploded. The elevator hadn’t dropped. Nothing supernatural had happened, unless you counted the way the building itself seemed to hold its breath.

Mara’s finger hovered.

She pressed the button.

The click sounded loud again. Not because the lobby was quiet—because Mara was listening for consequences.

The elevator didn’t arrive immediately.

Mara waited.

Ten seconds. Fifteen. Twenty.

The security guard’s newspaper rustled. He didn’t look up, but Mara could feel his attention like a warm beam.

Finally, the elevator arrived with a groan.

The doors opened.

Inside, no one stood there. Empty. The mirror at the back held Mara’s reflection. She looked pale. Curious. A little defiant.

Mara stepped in.

She faced the panel.

Her office was on 9, but she was going down. She could press B, she thought. Basement. Parking. Or 1, if that existed—no, there was only Lobby as the default.

Her hand floated toward B.

Behind her, the elevator doors began to close.

A foot slid in, stopping them.

The man in the tan overcoat stepped inside, as if he’d been waiting just out of sight. He smelled like cold air and peppermint gum.

He didn’t glance at Mara. He didn’t scold her. He didn’t smile.

He simply stood beside the panel, close enough that Mara could feel the heat of him.

The doors closed.

The man lifted his hand and pressed B.

The elevator began to descend.

Mara’s throat tightened. “Were you—” she started, then stopped. The question felt too large, too sharp.

The man’s eyes remained on the doors. His voice was quiet, almost gentle. “It’s easier,” he said, “when one person does it.”

Mara swallowed. “Why?”

The man’s jaw moved, chewing something invisible.

He didn’t answer the way Mara wanted. He didn’t give history or reason.

He said, “Because we all share the same car.”

Mara stared at the doors. The numbers flickered. 8. 7. 6.

At 7, the elevator stopped.

The doors opened to the empty hallway.

The air thinned again.

The man didn’t move. He didn’t step out. He didn’t smile.

He waited, still, like he was offering time for something that wasn’t there to happen.

Mara stood frozen beside him, her fingers curled around her bag strap.

Nothing entered. Nothing changed.

After a beat—longer than usual—the man pressed something. The doors shut.

The elevator continued down.

At B, the doors opened to a concrete corridor that smelled like damp and oil. A row of old bicycles leaned against a wall. A single fluorescent bulb buzzed like an insect.

Mara stepped out quickly.

The man followed. He walked beside her toward the garage door, their footsteps echoing.

Mara tried again, softer. “I just… I don’t understand.”

The man turned his head then, finally looking at her. His eyes were tired but clear, the kind of eyes that had watched a lot of people learn the same lesson.

“You don’t have to understand,” he said. Not unkindly. Like he was telling her she didn’t have to memorize the wiring diagram to use a light switch. “You just have to do it.”

Mara wanted to say, That’s the same thing everyone says right before something goes wrong.

But the man’s face wasn’t threatening. It was practical. A little sad.

He reached the garage door and held it open with one hand. Cold air rushed in. The city’s noise—cars, distant sirens, someone laughing—poured into the concrete corridor like water.

As Mara stepped through, she looked back.

The man in the tan overcoat was already turning toward the elevator, walking with the steady pace of someone returning a library book.

Mara watched him disappear behind the closing doors.

The next morning, Mara arrived at 8:49. The line formed as always. The call button waited untouched.

She took her place at the end.

When the elevator arrived, the doors opened, and everyone stepped in with their quiet choreography.

Mara stepped in last.

She faced forward.

She didn’t reach for the buttons.

At 7, when the doors opened to the empty hallway, Mara kept her expression neutral. She kept her breathing even.

The woman with the library tote offered her brief smile.

Mara almost smiled too, not because she believed in anything on that seventh floor, but because she understood the shape of the moment now. The little pause. The tiny acknowledgment. The reset.

The elevator rose. At 9, Mara stepped out.

As she walked down the hall, she passed the stairwell door with the fire drill sign. She noticed, for the first time, a second sheet of paper tucked beneath it, older, corners curled. The ink was faded.

A simple message, written in the same careful hand:

Please be considerate.

Mara paused.

She stared at it for a long moment, the words offering nothing and everything at once.

Then she kept walking.

At her desk, she opened her laptop, logged in, and did her work.

At noon, when she and Lina waited for the elevator, Lina leaned close again, eyes darting.

“I swear,” Lina whispered, “the last guy who pressed a button himself—”

The elevator arrived. Doors opened.

Lina stopped mid-sentence, smile snapping into place.

They stepped in.

Mara watched the man in the tan overcoat press the button with two fingers.

The elevator rose.

At 7, it opened its mouth to the empty hall.

Mara held still.

Somewhere deep in the building, pipes clicked and sighed. The faint hum of electricity ran through the walls like blood.

Nothing stepped in.

The woman with the library tote smiled politely at the emptiness, and this time Mara understood that the smile was not for a ghost or a person or a secret. It was for the shared agreement. For the way everyone pretended the rule didn’t need explaining.

The doors closed.

The elevator rose on.

And Mara, without thinking, kept her hands to herself.

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About the Creator

Lawrence Lease

Alaska born and bred, Washington DC is my home. I'm also a freelance writer. Love politics and history.

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