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The Vanisher

Part 1: He vanishes MORE than a Diamond

By KomalPublished 10 months ago 2 min read

They whispered his name in hushed tones like a rumor, velvet-soft as a knife's keen edge: Elric Vane.

He was nowhere to belong, but he'd played every casino from Monte Carlo to Macau, leaving wide eyes and empty vaults in HIS wake.

But Elric was NOT the average card shark or street swindler. NO, he was a magician. Not the top hat, rabbit variety. The variety who could make your wallet vanish during a chat, your secrets spill from your mouth like wine on the table, and your past bend into something you never knew.

Illusion was his ART.

Deception was his brush.

And every job was a masterpiece.

Tonight, his stage was the opulently decorated cruise ship The Argent Dawn, halfway between Cairo and Venice.

The audience was precisely what he adored—wealthy, distracted, hungry for something thrilling. Elric stood atop a gilt-embossed podium, rolled-up sleeves, bowtie opened just so to imply risk.

“Tonight,” he declared, “I shall do the IMPOSSIBLE. I shall make something vanish that NO man ever has.”

Laughter.

Challenge accepted.

The audience was unaware, but under their velvet seats were sensors. Elric's sidekick—a hacker named Quill—was already reading information off all the electronic equipment on board. Passports, bank accounts, identities.

A vanishing act for the digital universe.

The trick? A floating diamond. Elric took the ship's gem, “The Eye of Horus,” and said he'd float it over his palms, spin it around in the air, and then gently place it exactly where he initially touched it, without a scratch, in its glass case.

The lights faded...

Silence descended...

He breathed into a spell in a word that nobody knew, but was in fact a reversed Latin cookbook recipe for marinara. The diamond ascended, rotated within his palm, glowed—and disappeared.

Gasps.

Cheers.

Show over? Not yet.

As he bowed, a lone clap lingered too long. A woman in RED emerged from the audience.

Bluestone EYES.

Smoky voice.

You vanished the diamond,” she told him, “but can you RESTORE the life you took?”

The crowd was silent...

Elric blinked AND losted.

He didn't know HER name.

But he knew those eyes.

They were the eyes of the girl he'd performed his magic in Paris.

The one who'd vanished in a fire ten years ago.

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To be continued…

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AUTHOR's NOTE:

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING!

Part-2 will be written by Rowan Finley and to find his profile, follow the link below:

Mysterythriller

About the Creator

Komal

I write poems and stories that hit the feels.

When I’m not lost in my own plots, I’m either daydreaming about the next big idea or just winging life with a grin.

𝕀 𝕙𝕒𝕧𝕖 𝕥𝕙𝕖 ℙ𝕠𝕨𝕖𝕣 𝕥𝕠 𝕞𝕒𝕜𝕖 𝕒𝕟 𝕀𝕄ℙ𝔸ℂ𝕋

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  • Sandy Gillman8 months ago

    I just saw you've written part 3, so I've come to read part 1 first. I love it so far!

  • Rohitha Lanka10 months ago

    Excellent storytelling

  • SP 10 months ago

    Once again your writing is fantastic

  • Mother Combs10 months ago

    Ok. Now I want to know what happens next

  • Rowan Finley 10 months ago

    Wow! Komal, bravo - this is such a wonderful mystery - what will happen next... hmm?!? I'm excited to see how this unfolds. :D

  • Marie McGrath10 months ago

    Wowza. Gripping. Tenterhooks until Part Two.

  • Aspen Marie 10 months ago

    This is so fun!

  • Maryam Batool10 months ago

    The ending was chilling! 👏 The way she entered the spectacle like a plot-twist..! Did he take a life? Killed someone? I wanna knoww 😵

  • Archery Owl10 months ago

    Wow. Very intriguing. I can’t wait for the next part

  • Marie381Uk 10 months ago

    Amazing as usual ♦️♦️♦️

  • So desu...and the question is, what did he DO to her? For you to write, my friend!

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