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The Echoes of Eliza

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By Himanshu KumarPublished 2 years ago 3 min read
The Echoes of Eliza
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The old Victorian house stood tall and imposing, its once-grand facade now crumbling and neglected. For years, the local children had dared each other to venture up the overgrown path and peer through the dusty windows, whispering rumors of the tragic fate that had befallen the family who had once called this place home.

Eliza was one of those children, her curious nature and thirst for adventure often leading her to the abandoned property. She would stand at the edge of the property, her fingers tracing the intricate iron gate as she listened to the faint whispers that seemed to emanate from the house itself.

"It's haunted, you know," the other children would whisper, their eyes wide with fear. "They say the spirits of the family still linger, trapped within those walls."

Eliza never paid much heed to such superstitions. She was a practical girl, more interested in the history and the mysteries that lurked within the house than in any supernatural nonsense. And so, one fateful day, she summoned her courage and stepped through the gate, determined to uncover the truth for herself.

As she approached the house, Eliza couldn't help but feel a sense of unease. The air was thick and stagnant, and the shadows seemed to cling to the crumbling walls. She hesitated for a moment, her hand hovering over the weathered doorknob, but her curiosity ultimately won out.

The door creaked open, and Eliza stepped inside, her footsteps echoing through the abandoned foyer. The once-lavish furnishings had been left to rot, covered in a thick layer of dust and cobwebs. Eliza felt a chill run down her spine, as if the very air was imbued with a palpable sense of sorrow and despair.

As she explored the house, Eliza couldn't shake the feeling that she was being watched. The whispers she had heard from outside seemed to have followed her, and she could swear she caught glimpses of movement in the shadows. But she pressed on, driven by an insatiable need to uncover the secrets that lay hidden within these walls.

It was in the attic that Eliza made her most disturbing discovery. Tucked away in a dusty corner, she found a tattered journal, its pages yellowed and worn. As she carefully leafed through the pages, a harrowing story began to emerge - a tale of a family torn apart by grief and betrayal, their once-idyllic lives shattered by a shocking act of violence.

The entries chronicled the descent of the family matriarch, Amelia, into madness after the mysterious death of her youngest daughter, Olivia. Eliza read with mounting horror as Amelia's grief consumed her, driving her to lash out against her remaining family members in increasingly disturbing ways.

The final entry, written in a shaky, erratic hand, described how Amelia had murdered her husband and elder daughter, Eliza, before taking her own life. Eliza felt a chill run down her spine as she realized the horrific implications - that the spirit she had felt watching her, the whispers that had beckoned her, were not those of a haunting, but of the very woman whose journal she now held in her hands.

As Eliza stood there, the journal trembling in her hands, a sudden realization dawned on her. The house, the family, the tragedy - it had all been real, not just a mere urban legend. And in that moment, she knew she had to leave, to escape the oppressive weight of the echoes that still lingered within these walls.

But as she turned to flee, Eliza felt a presence behind her, a cold, ghostly hand reaching out to grasp her shoulder. She whirled around, her heart racing, only to come face to face with the spectral image of Amelia, her once-beautiful features now twisted in a mask of pure, unadulterated rage.

"You," the ghost hissed, her voice a chilling whisper that seemed to reverberate through Eliza's very soul. "How dare you intrude upon my domain, to defile the memory of my family."

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Himanshu Kumar

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