Laughing Stag
My failures as a hunter poem
What is life without meaning?
The imperfect hunt of needing to question why
My white stag taunting so dazzling and gleaning
Every arrow missing its mark with a heavy sigh
I thought knowing why would bring me joy
Joy in finally hitting that smug stag
Maybe I could go back to being a boy
Before I learned how to tag
Or maybe I miss on purpose
Because the mundane chore of hunting is the purpose
What would I feel without chasing my mark
Failure is part of my character arc
So, I’ll smirk lining up a shot
While that stag laughs in the cold morning air
Here’s to my constant plot
And that stag will never care
Maybe I should have hunted a hare
About the Creator
Matthew Mccahey
I want to use stories and life experiences to allow others to be open about their own.
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Comments (6)
This is really cool. Matthew. Wonderful entry
Oh, I love this, very meaningful.
Great
Very cool. I enjoy the subtle ending mystery, of whether the stag was hit or not.
The flow in this is amazing!
Excellent Entry to the Challenge!