Lollipop
Confectionary Colors on a Stickโ
Photo by Ali Pazani on Unsplash
Lollipop ๐ญ
Radiant,
-Luminous
Bright,
And
-Sweetโฆ
Lollipop-
Oh,
Lollipop-
My favorite
Treatโฆ
During Snack time and after I Eat.
-Bring Lollipops ๐ญ
Bring them
For meโฆ
About the Creator
HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)
โ Public Diary, of an Urban LGBTQ Poet
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Another playful piece - Nice!
Congratulations on top story ๐๐๐
I like it!! Trick or Treatโฆ
Beautiful choice of words!
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Great story and congrats! โค๏ธ
Congrats on your TOP STORY lil broski!
Lollipops have always been okay, but never my favorite confection. I've always loved the song, however, & thoroughly enjoyed your little ode to it here.
Such a sweet poem! I prefer chocolate personally but never refuse a good olโ lollipop!
Lollipops are one of the best Halloween candy! ๐ญ ๐ฉต๐ Congrats!
Neither by land, nor by sea, Will you find a poet more handsome, then handsomelouii When you say hello, he says goodbye. And he spells louis with a double i You may drive a Chevy, but for him it's always Ford. The handsomest of all poets, aka Lonzo Ward. LOL! Cograts again buddy. That's another $5 right in the old wallet. Goodbye neighborhood poetry slams 5 nights a week, hello retirement on private island! I've said if from day one and I will say it until my dying breath, of all the handsome poets through the course of history, none have been nor ever likely will be as handsome as handsomelouii, the handsomest of all the poets. Not even that snake in the grass handsomelarry. I really hate that guy.And the less said about handsomelisa the better. LOL Seriously, congrats again and awesome poem brother.
Short and sweet! Congrats on TS!
I like lollis Lol great job here my friend on your top story ๐ ๐
Sweet sweet lollipoppy! I lovey your poemy about lollipoppy!
Trick or treat for a lollipop sweet
Lol. That's cute.
First man, I've heard who loves lollipops. LOL. Lovely poem.
Ooo. Iโm a sucker for a sucker! Good one Lonzo! ๐ญ
Yes, this is a sweet one. Fun poem, Lonzo!
This was a fun poem! Definitely perfect for halloween month!
Nice job has me thinking about candy
tootsie pops were always my favorites
Hahahaha โค๏ธโค๏ธ I am buying lollipop today Sweet and Trick treat Thank You for sharing Your favorite snack in a lovely poem :) ๐
Lovely! Great photo choice too!