Rays of Redemption
I look up and wonder, is this all I need?
Will I find my peace
in your rays of redemption,
or fall to pieces?
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Cathy holmes
Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.
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Our Song
Evening has given way to night. Gently, I settle next to you on the comfortable, old love seat and reach for your hand. You snatch it away, again. It cuts me to the quick, but I hide the pain, understanding that the reaction is but part of your demented state. Since the accident, your presence here in our cozy home has been clouded by a haze I can't see. Nevertheless, I feel the frigidity of your expressions and it serves as an excruciating reminder of the immeasurable distance between us.
By Dana Crandell4 days ago in Fiction
Comments (18)
Beautiful photo - beautiful haiku - Nicely Done!!
Excellent work♥️
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What a photo😍🤯and a gorgeous haiku to go with it. I love when the light spills through a hole in the sky. 🩷✨
Your picture and words are so inspiring!!! Love it!!!❤️❤️💕
nature is a fickle master
The peace, pieces bookends were a stroke of genius! Great work, Cathy!
Brilliant - another outstanding haiku! 😍
Love your play on peace/pieces - very clever. Lovely.
Excellent words
Beautiful and breathtaking!! So smartly done Cathy!
Profound. An excellent question, and I’m scared of the answers!
Lovely Haiku, Cathy. Surely you’ll enter your “Heaven’s Curtain” haiku for this challenge too? (if you haven’t already!). Get a double win 😉
Lovely haiku and photo
Love love love!
Whoaaa, how'd you manage to get such a perfect shot??? That's soooo stunning! Loved your photo and Haiku!
I'm with JBaz. "Rays of redemption" is such a great phrase though.
A very spiritual feel, like a personal heeling prayer