Rage tints all I see
Bloody moon swallowed by void
Mirroring my soul
About the Creator
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Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Feelings Never Die
It is Valentine's Day again, and it bought back memories that were over fifty years old. It bought me back to 1971, and I woke up and I knew my baby was due today. I was big and pregnant, and I felt like I was about to burst wide open. Imagine my surprise when the doctor told my I had a due date of February 14. I couldn't believe it, and since my baby was due today, I felt I could indulge myself a bit. I had gained a lot of weight, and chocolate was on the no-no list, but I had came to the end of this pregnancy, and I hoped it would be okay, after all I would deliver this baby today. So I walked across the street to the grocery story, and bought myself, a peppermint patty, covered in chocolate, my favorite. Me and my Valentine's baby would enjoy it together.
By Susan Payton4 days ago in Fiction
Comments (6)
The imagery is so vivid that with such few words you painted a perfect picture.
Way to let the dark side out. Great haiku!
This was so poignantly beautiful! Loved your Haiku!
Very cool 😎 Love it!❤️
Red they say is the color of rage. Is a red moon the same meaning as a full moon. Some say that a full moon certain people kind of change demeanor.
Awesome!!!