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Once UFOs, and Now...
Unidentified? We look up, all aeriel... and phenomena. * Thank you for reading! If you liked this, you can add your Insights, Comment, leave a Heart, Tip, Pledge, or Subscribe. I will appreciate any support you have shown for my work.
By Kendall Defoe about a year ago in Poets
Mosh Pit
Welcome to the mosh pit Stay home If you’re afraid to get hit There are no enemies here Just friends and good times Our music doesn’t always rhyme
By Atomic Historianabout a year ago in Poets
Fifth Clerihew
Wu Zetian Vicious, vengeful, and decisive, she seized the absolute affection of the Son of Heaven Suppressed opponents over and covert, crowned herself emperor
By Wen Xiaoshengabout a year ago in Poets
Broken Melodies
Echoes of Longing In the quiet of the night, I hear, The echoes of your voice so near, A whisper on the wind’s soft breath, A haunting song of love’s regret.
By Sazeeb Chowduryabout a year ago in Poets
Wounded Hearts
Silent Yearnings In shadows where my heart does dwell, A love unspoken, none can tell, Your gaze, a light I cannot claim, A silent yearning, endless flame.
By Sazeeb Chowduryabout a year ago in Poets
Assignment: 2nd person
Today in my writing work group we had to write a poem all in 2nd person. I was a bit confused because I don't usually write this way. I guess when I write the word "you" I am usually writing about "Her", not me, so it was weird. Anyway, here goes.... Feedback is appreciated but it's okay if it is too boring to comment on. LOL!
By ᔕᗩᗰ ᕼᗩᖇTYabout a year ago in Poets
Smog
Felt before it's seen... 'You should get some fresh air, man...!' Not if I see...that... Laugh or cry... * Thank you for reading!
By Kendall Defoe about a year ago in Poets
These Walls III
These walls‐ only those inside, know that they stand and only those who have received an invite know that they even exist.
By Josh Morganabout a year ago in Poets
Error & Trial (Life With ADHD)
Every step is a new, every day, at square one. Is life nothing more than this vicious cycle of trial and error? All acquired information is soon ejected,
By Josh Morganabout a year ago in Poets
Death of a World
Developing technology to chronicle our destruction We’ve been here so long Yet, we know so little The more we learn The more disappears
By Atomic Historianabout a year ago in Poets
I plead for sleep. Content Warning.
Despair grips: help me! Alone on my balcony. Dawn! Fear extinguished! * My second entry into the: * You may like to read my first entry for the ‘Sky-ku’ challenge:
By Pauline Fountainabout a year ago in Poets
True Love- Unknown
A love that followed me every time I practised Love as I practised RHYME They find it strange to love unknown! 'To keep love pure'-- Is it a crime?
By Maryam Batoolabout a year ago in Poets