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The Museum of Unfinished Thoughts

Echoes behind the glass

By Alain SUPPINIPublished 3 months ago 1 min read

The museum opens only at dusk.

No tickets, no lines —

only the hush of visitors who look like shadows remembering themselves.

In the first room,

a thousand sentences hang from the ceiling,

each cut short mid-breath.

You can still feel the warmth of their speakers

lingering in the air like static.

Some of them end with "if only"

or "I was going to say—"

Others stop after a name,

as if even the echo had grown shy.

In the second room,

glass cases hold the smallest exhibits:

an unsent letter,

a confession rehearsed too many times,

a single sigh folded neatly inside an envelope.

There’s a recording you can’t quite hear —

someone saying “I miss you” in a voice

that’s been erased and rewritten a hundred times.

The third room is colder.

Here lie the thoughts that arrived too late,

the ones that found no language

and curled back into silence.

They glitter faintly under the low light,

like coins at the bottom of a wishing well.

In the corner,

a guide whispers:

“Please don’t touch the glass —

the exhibits are fragile.

Even remembering them can break them.”

Still, you reach out.

And for a moment,

the words on the other side stir —

half-alive, half-dream,

as if recognizing the pulse of your fingertips.

You leave quietly,

without signing the guestbook.

Outside, the night exhales —

and you carry its whisper with you:

not everything unsaid is lost,

some things simply stay

waiting to be heard.

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About the Creator

Alain SUPPINI

I’m Alain — a French critical care anesthesiologist who writes to keep memory alive. Between past and present, medicine and words, I search for what endures.

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  • Ayesha Writes3 months ago

    Every line feels intentional. You’ve got a gift for expression.

  • K.B. Silver 3 months ago

    Nicely done. I went back and read the museum of missing heart beats as well, it was like visiting another room in your haunted museum.

  • Bren3 months ago

    3rd line - I'm hooked! I doff my hat good sir - this is beyond fantastic and just what I needed! Thank you! Kudos Alain

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