Plot Development

And Just Like That
A much-needed, more diverse update to a beloved franchise. Golden intentions, but untrue to the characters in a way that makes the storylines ring hollow. This revival needs to lean into its stars’ long-developed personalities and sense of motivation in order to make their mid-life transformations feel satisfying.
By Joelle E N2 years ago in Critique
How the candidates 'visions for America resonate with voters' aspirations and values
A Vision United: Mark's Journey of Hope In a small Midwestern town, Mark had always been known as a hardworking mechanic with a heart of gold. He cherished his close-knit community and the values they held dear. As the Republican Party began to select their next presidential candidate, Mark found himself captivated by the discourse surrounding the candidates' visions for America.
By rofitaaa2 years ago in Critique
Probably Just a Coincidence
The Setting: At a table in an Oklahoma prison. The Main Cast: Two men having a conversation One is a professed psychiatrist and atheist; the other is a professed demon on death row. One thinks he's there to provide an assessment on the other's sanity, but it's his in question.
By LJ Pollard 2 years ago in Critique
Oppenheimer (2023, dir. Christopher Nolan)
Everybody sucked & the plot hinged on manufactured drama with RDJ’s character. Oppenheimer knew what he was doing & I have no sympathy for his guilt. “I am become Death…” Hubris cannot simultaneously be punished & celebrated.
By Mackenzie Davis2 years ago in Critique
A Few More
A fist full of words Just a few critiques more That’s what was in store When the word slinger Pulled the computer from the drawer
By Atomic Historian2 years ago in Critique
Unforgiving- Alien Weaponry
I hate to admit that the first time I heard Unforgiving was in concert. The first time was surreal, as I stood next to my brother, who I nearly lost the previous year. Little did I know a year later, this would be my comfort song when my grandmother passed.
By Atomic Historian2 years ago in Critique
Man In The Box
Man In The Box has always been my favorite Alice In Chains song. Perhaps because I’ve often felt that I’ve been trying to escape the box that people are always trying to paint me into. Most definitely it has something to do with Layne Staley and Jerry Cantrell’s vocal styling.
By Atomic Historian2 years ago in Critique
In the Mix with YouTube
Music mix channels are some of the best parts of YouTube. They keep you company when writing or studying. They’re great for finding new music, without having to dig through tons of other channels, or Spotify. It’s often the best part of my day to put music on and write.
By Atomic Historian2 years ago in Critique
My Fair Lady
My Fair Lady is abuse, misogyny, and an alarming age gape all concealed in delightful musical numbers. Alas, despite these glaring flaws, it delights and warms the heart. Join Eliza, a poor flower girl, as she rises up in social ranking with the help of a berating phonetics professor, Henry.
By Laura Lann2 years ago in Critique
The New Human Resources
Netflix is a streaming service that provides its customers with an abundance of original content. Under the "adult animation" tab is a show: Human Resources. Once you get past the grossness, the situations are relatable. The first few episodes touch on post-partum depression, infidelity and alcoholism. Worth a watch...18+
By Latoya Giles 2 years ago in Critique
The Un-Welcoming To Ghana: You Don't Invite Someone To A Dirty House
Thursday, 24 August 2023 By: TB Obwoge Momma Ebo, (That's what I will call her) would awake around 5 am, I think, because morning wasn't my thing after all.
By IwriteMywrongs2 years ago in Critique
Rap
Where did you learn to write poetry? I read a lot of poetry. That's true. More often, I listened to rap. While I like most music, rap will always be one of my favorite genres. It has taught me more than rhythm and rhyme. It’s taught me about the world.
By Atomic Historian2 years ago in Critique